How I feel when I do the Haka
Boom! Boom! Boom! Feet stomp multiple times to create a strong . Adrenalin flows fast thru my body. I see powerful motions being made.
I hear proud shouts and chants as the Haka begins. I taste the crowds cold fear as they watch the amazing performance. I smell traces of sweat from the warrior like boys. The Haka ends with and i feel strong,powerful and proud of my culture.
Good haka writing Frankie this is how i feel about the haka to.So so good Frankie.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece of writing, it is enjoyable, I like how you used boom boom boom in your writing.
ReplyDeleteHello Franki my name its me Benjamin. I like your writing but Franki why don't you add some words like in the first sentence like strong beat in the first sentence. Bit other tan that Franki your writing is actually a really good piece of writing. Weldone Franki
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